Once their were a ugly dog and he was all the time he was excited and he ate little dogs, cats ,frogs ,
and also rats and all that would be a meal to him and he never ate his real food.
Along with that he smelled like a cow and all you seen is his ugly teeth hanging out and at last their was a monkey who was his friend and he got tired of him an ate him up like a soup and.
That was the last time he saw him the end.
I think you need to make your sentence longer but I liked your story so much. It was exiting because it was about a ugly cat and it was cool also it had a little bit details.
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